Death Cloud

[Payron]

Why shattered dreams?? Do you just want cheap first turn discards I would rather like      
Hymn to Tourach or even Black Mail over shattered dreams, but I don t think this card is that good  ... but worm harvest is proboply a good idea, when I think about worm harvest and some recrusion in this deck wouldn t hermit druid also git in here quite nice?! You could get Raven Crime, Genesis, Lftl, or some synergies with academy ruines or volraths stronhold ... ... and y I guess your right with your sweepers so It won t heard u as bad ...

[Nastaboi]

Feel free to add any card to the deck. I added Shatter to have another Cloud-like effect. Hymn is the only good cheap discard spell not already in the deck, and two black mana is not always quaranted before third turn. I might still try it.

And please make an effort to write English. You posts are very difficult to read, and at least to me, poor writing is a big turnoff.

[Mythrandir]

I added Dreams to have another Cloud-like effect.

hmm.. i dont see how shattered dreams is equivalent to death cloud. perhaps you meant another card, no?

Shattered dreams B
Sorcery

Target opponent reveals his or her hand.  Choose an artifact card from it.  That player discards that card.

[Nastaboi]

I obviously meant Mind Shatter. Sorry for the confusion.

[Nastaboi]

If someone is still interested, I have been fine-tuning this deck lately. It has two natural additions in recently unbanned cards. Changes are in bold.

// Lands (36)

    1 Polluted Delta
    1 Simic Growth Chamber
    1 Bloodstained Mire
    1 Golgari Rot Farm
    1 Reflecting Pool
    1 Mutavault
    1 Mishra's Factory
    1 Boseiju, Who Shelters All
    1 Treetop Village
    1 Underground Sea
    1 Bayou
    1 Dimir Aqueduct
    1 Windswept Heath
    1 Twilight Mire
    1 Tropical Island
    2 Snow-Covered Swamp
    1 Wooded Foothills
    2 Snow-Covered Forest
    1 Snow-Covered Island
    1 Wasteland
    1 Overgrown Tomb
    1 Temple of the False God
    1 Flooded Strand
    1 Volrath's Stronghold
    1 Forest
    1 Swamp
    1 Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoth
    1 Llanowar Wastes
    1 Dust Bowl (replaces Academy Ruins)
    1 Sunken Ruins
    1 Flooded Grove
    1 Lonely Sandbar
    1 Barren Moor
    1 Tranquil Thicket (replaces basics)


// Rampant (11)

    1 Birds of Paradise (still too good not to run)
    1 Search for Tomorrow

    1 Nature's Lore
    1 Rampant Growth
    1 Farseek
    1 Edge of Autumn
    1 Three Visits
    1 Into the North
    1 Sakura-Tribe Elder

    1 Solemn Simulacrum
    1 Garruk Wildspeaker


// Removal (16)

    1 Maze of Ith

    1 Ghastly Demise

    1 Terror
    1 Smother
    1 Shriekmaw
    1 Viridian Zealot

    1 Putrefy
    1 Pernicious Deed
    1 Krosan Grip
    1 Bane of the Living

    1 Wickerbough Elder
    1 The Abyss
    1 Damnation

    1 Crime/Punishment
    1 Profane Command
    1 Engineered Explosives

// Disruption (10)

    1 Tormod's Crypt (Replaces Phyrexian Furnace. Faster activation has been more important than a card)

    1 Thoughtseize
    1 Duress
    1 Raven's Crime

    1 Persecute

    1 Plow Under
    1 Primal Command

    1 Mind Twist
    1 Mind Shatter
    1 Death Cloud

// Draw/tutor/other CA (22)

    1 Sensei's Divining Top
    1 Entomb (replaces Buried Alive)
    1 Brainstorm

    1 Night's Whisper (100th card)
    1 Demonic Tutor
    1 Regrowth
    1 Sylvan Library
    1 Life from the Loam

    1 Grim Tutor (replaces Tainted Pact as there are too many cards in the deck that doesn't like to be removed)
    1 Phyrexian Arena
    1 Intuition
    1 Beseech the Queen
    1 Eternal Witness
    1 Shadowmage Infiltrator
    1 Trinket Mage

    1 Graveborn Muse
    1 Deep Analysis
    1 Gifts Ungiven
    1 Fact or Fiction

    1 Mulldrifter
    1 Genesis
    1 Liliana Vess

// Great blockers and occasional finishers (5)

    1 Tarmogoyf

    1 Kitchen Finks

    1 Ravenous Baloth
    1 Chameleon Colossus (Still unsure about the need of this and Meloku. This has been nice, Meloku not so often. Worm Harvest never did a thing.)

    1 Meloku the Clouded Mirror

As you can see, the deck has become more Loam-centered and CA-oriented. It may not be necessary, but I could see myself adding something to better handle aggro rushes, propably Darkheart Sliver or some cheap removal. All my favourite cheap removal is already in the deck, so I don't know what to add next.