RG aggro/tokens

[Demonlance]

I am new to this format, but i did my best to make a highlander deck that wins before my opponents have their board set up while staying on my low budget. Anyway, here's my deck. I'm open to suggestions.

Lands (36)
11 Mountain
14 forest
1 snow-covered mountain
1 snow-covered forest
1 dryad arbor
1 gruul turf
1 jungle shrine
1 fungal reaches
1 terramorphic expanse
1 savage lands
1 kher keep
1 Grove of the burnwillows
1 naya panorama

Creatures (36)
1 Imperious perfect
1 Rakdos Pit Dragon
1 Nimble Mongoose
1 Wild Nacatl
1 Hell's Thunder
1 Rosheen meanderer
1 Mogg war Marshal
1 Ayumi, the Last Visitor
1 Tattermunge Maniac
1 Thelonite Hermit
1 Yavimaya Elder
1 Keldon Marauders
1 Apocalypse Hydra
1 Shivan wurm
1 Essence warden
1 Mogg fanatic
1 Llanowar Elves
1 Etarnal witness
1 Troll ascetic
1 Hellspark Elemental
1 Taurean Mauler
1 Squee, Goblin Nabob
1 Mogg flunkies
1 Topan ascetic
1 Stigma lasher
1 Scattershot Archer
1 Siege-Gang Commander
1 Simian Grunts
1 Sakura-tribe elder
1 Thornweald Archer
1 Dryad sophisticate
1 Thunderblust
1 Mycolith
1 Tin Street Hooligan
1 Jaya Ballard, Task Mage
1 Flametongue Kavu   Instants (11)
1 Puncture blast
1 Brute force
1 Giant growth
1 Worldly tutor
1 Wild ricochet
1 sprout swarm
1 mercy killing
1 lightning bolt
1 Soul's fire
1 Naturalize
1 Crop rotation

Sorceries (7)
1 Waves of Aggresion
1 Rift bolt
1 Gift of gargantuan
1 Nature's lore
1 Banefire
1 Demonfire
1 Dragon Fodder

Enchantments (6)
1 rancor
1 everlasting torment
1 rise of the hobgoblins
1 night soil
1 stormbind
1 survival of the fittest

Artifacts (4)
1 Spawning pit
1 Sword of fire and ice
1 Whispersilk cloak
1 Sword of light and shadow

Planeswalkers (2)
1 Garruk wildspeaker
1 Sarkhan Vol

[Fish]

Well, you still did not get your answer and although I am new here, I try to give you some kind of comment to your deck. I know it is not wise to try to give you advise when I am asking for an advise myslef but maybe it will help to start the discussion.
First of all I am not sure, if your deck has some kind of strategy. I posted my RG deck and it is straightforward and ment to "kick everything out of my opponent." This means small, cheap critters and burn. When I look at your deck I am not sure what it wants to do. Your deck has "beatdown" cards like Wild Nacatl, Keldon Marauders, Tattermunge Maniac and pumps like Brute Force then some midrange or lategame cards like Siege-Gang, Rakdos-Pit Dragon, Thelonite Hermit and also "mana boosts" like Sakura, Yavimaya Elder, finally there are Tutors and finishers like Demonfire.
Maybe I am wrong but I would try to think about what I want to play. If it is going to be aggro, or tokens or midrange. Your deck looks funny but there is a little bit of everything and I am not sure if it is correct.
Just my opinion.

[Mythrandir]

First of all I am not sure, if your deck has some kind of strategy. I posted my RG deck and it is straightforward and ment to "kick everything out of my opponent."

Aggreed. i really cant see a token deck here, you´re missing quite a few cards. Also you should try and take a look at this: http://www.magicplayer.org/forum/index.php?topic=112.0 I know it's tri-colored, but black really makes it worth: bitterblossom/removal/protection (duress, etc)

I noticed you use a lot of X, rosheen/hydra.. i think you should define your strategy, i´m gonna review a token deck, so everything like this and the i CMC aggro drops is going away


I now you wanna keep it on budget, but does that include t2/extended staples? or older cards just like dual lands?

here´s a very quick review:

Lands:
Try these:
cycle lands
mtavault (â,¬â,¬â,¬)
shocklands (these aren´t that expensive nowadays)
fetches (â,¬â,¬â,¬)
gaes cradle (â,¬â,¬â,¬â,¬â,¬â,¬â,¬)
wasteland/ghost quarter.
Pendelhaven

cut: alara tri-color lands.

Creature:
-rakdos
- nimble
- wild nactal
- hells thunder
- rosheen
- ayumi last visitor
- tatermunge
- shivan wurm
- troll ascetic
- hellspakr elemental
- mogg flunkies
- stigma lasher
- thornweal archer
- scatershot archer
- -thunderblast
- jaya

+noble (â,¬â,¬â,¬)
+ bird (â,¬â,¬)
+ deranged hermit
+ wall of roots
+ wall of blossoms
+ goblin sharpshooter (if you play some more gobs,you can play goblin matron)
+ wickerbough elder
+ glutnous slime
+ skullmulcher
+ 1 dragon with devour, you choose..
+ hissing iguanar
+ jund battlemage

instants:

-brute force
- giant growth
- mercy killing (if i read this right, you don´t get the tokens its the opponnent.
- soul's fire

+gilt leaf ambush
+ reach of brances
+ krosan grip
+ sudden shock
+ fire/removal (incinerate, etc, etc..)

sorceries:

+call of the herd
+ hunting tryad
+ worm harvest (good with LFTL)
+ Life from the loam
+ sylvan scrying

-nature lore


enchantments:

- everlasting torment

+ goblin assault


Artifacts:
- whispersilk cloak

+ slate of ancestry
+ sensei diving top
+ spawning pit

I think that about does it... you should really define your strategy. Don't forget to take a look at the link, i mentioned, it has a very good token deck in there.

hope it helps

[pyyhttu]

For reference: This RG-token build won some time ago a 20-player HL-tournament: http://vaihdetaan.kapsi.fi/forums/index.php?topic=57754.msg212173#msg212173